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Nammy wrote:OMG... Karma is scaring me... Eeke...

Nam.... ;PpppPpPp

Sheesh! It's not THAT bad!!! ;)

KKat

LoL, well sing it to me on vent one night before 12:00 am and I'll be the judge of that ;-)

KarmaKat wrote:Welcome to the boards! :compress:

Glad you've found a groove
on M-M One
Dancin' with the Raptors
& Titan stompin' some
Hangin' with the cool peeps
makin' sure
that Luci's done
All be goin' down
in teh name o'fun
Fightin' all the monsters
on M-M One!

Well, it's not bad, and would actually pass as rap if not for one acute flaw in your lyric design. And that is, that you forgot to drop in needless amounts of profanity and street slang. For instance, it would read better as:

Down in the hood we call MM1,
Playas be whackin' dem slobs fo' fun.
You gotta get down with some homies up the hill,
or dem blow-smoking gangstas be gettin' up in yo grill.

You been blastin' dem <female-based obscenities> wit' da MP5,
and dem west side medics been keepin' you 'live.
But it's time fo' the devil step, wave sixteen,
and those damn 'dren masters been high on green.

You're unarmed, alone, yo' homies is dead.
You can't come half-steppin', or you get played.
The Invasion Continues. Yo' crew is smoked.
And they pick some damn cube on the map vote.

True story.

Desko wrote:

KarmaKat wrote:Welcome to the boards! :compress:

Glad you've found a groove
on M-M One
Dancin' with the Raptors
& Titan stompin' some
Hangin' with the cool peeps
makin' sure
that Luci's done
All be goin' down
in teh name o'fun
Fightin' all the monsters
on M-M One!

Well, it's not bad, and would actually pass as rap if not for one acute flaw in your lyric design. And that is, that you forgot to drop in needless amounts of profanity and street slang. For instance, it would read better as:

Down in the hood we call MM1,
Playas be whackin' dem slobs fo' fun.
You gotta get down with some homies up the hill,
or dem blow-smoking gangstas be gettin' up in yo grill.

You been blastin' dem <female-based obscenities> wit' da MP5,
and dem west side medics been keepin' you 'live.
But it's time fo' the devil step, wave sixteen,
and those damn 'dren masters been high on green.

You're unarmed, alone, yo' homies is dead.
You can't come half-steppin', or you get played.
The Invasion Continues. Yo' crew is smoked.
And they pick some damn cube on the map vote.

True story.

Nice Desko, nice :compress:

lol very nice

Belated welcome Blackblade.

Props to Karma and Desko on the music....ahem...:cat:

So when you need someone to shoot the cover for your new rap CD, lemme know, mkay?

lol thx
and don't forget my cut since i'm the one who started this who thing by joining lol

....fo' shizzle!!



;)



KKat

waa waa

Delayed Welcome as well, but I see you in the server a lot, so it makes up for it. Welcome to the forums :cheers: